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Nominator: Shoot for the Stars (talk · contribs) 00:33, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Locust member (talk · contribs) 15:55, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hey, I will start reviewing this article in a few days. Song is a certified classic in my eyes Locust member (talk) 15:55, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Locust member I appreciate you taking the nomination. Victorious is one of my favorite childhood shows, and this song is definitely a banger. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 21:43, 29 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

· · ·
  • featuring American singer Victoria Justice - "featuring the American singer Victoria Justice" for WP:FALSETITLE reasons; I know this is not MOS and is an essay, but the current version is not grammatically correct (though it is widely accepted).
     Done
  • It was released as the first single from the show's soundtrack album Victorious: Music from the Hit TV Show (2011) - "...from the show's soundtrack album, Victorious: Music from the Hit TV Show (2011), ..." to avoid WP:SEAOFBLUE do the same in Background and release
     Done
  • Remove the Spotify and Spartanburg Herald-Journal sources from the first sentence of Background and release to avoid WP:OVERLINKING. All information is covered by Apple Music and Billboard.
     Done
  • It later appeared on the American television sitcom Victorious' one-hour special of the same name on November 26, 2010. - "It was later featured in the one-hour special of the same name on the American television sitcom Victorious, which aired on November 26, 2010."
     Done
  • Remove LA Times source after "...her help to get revenge.", just for OVERLINKING
     Done
  • Source [13] (Her Campus) has a MOS:CURLY quotation mark in its title
     Done
  • The period after "obscenity" in Music and lyrics should be outside the quotations per WP:INOROUT
     Done
  • wikilink Auto-Tune
     Done
  • Jason Lipshutz, writing for Billboard said - "Jason Lipshutz, writing for Billboard, said"
     Done
  • wikilink ASAP
     Done
  • "number 14", "number six", and "number four" in Critical reception violates MOS:NUMNOTES. I would suggest writing "fourteen" out alongside six and four.
     Done
  • wikilink certified in Commercial performance
     Done
  • Los Angeles Times needs restricted access level
     Done
  • Earwig shows copyvio unlikely of 16.7%. Well done!
  • No edit disputes or wars within the past 14 days. Green tick
  • Follows NPOV Green tick
  • Broad and does not veer off topic Green tick
  • Single cover is properly licensed, though it needs ALT text.
     Done

Spot-check:

Reading through, all sources seem to confirm their accompanied text.

  • A few sources I have not seen before on here (or are on WP:RSP), but I searched through them and see no reason to think they are unreliable.

Overall @Shoot for the Stars: Nice job here! Only minor complaints; mainly with 1a and 1b. Lemme know once you've got it all done and I'll pass this on! Putting this  On hold for now.

@Locust member: Thank you so much for reviewing the article! I have addressed your comments above. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 03:29, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Awesome work! Happy to ✓ Pass this on Locust member (talk) 21:23, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]